The bar graph illustrates the changes in the proportion of the population in four different countries which are India, China, the USA, and Japan between 1950 and 2022, and indicates the projections till 2050. It can be seen from the graph that China and India have the biggest percentages during the given period of time.
To begin with, although people who lived in China made up a little over a quarter of the world’s population in 1950, it showed a slightly decreasing until today. It is predicted that the population of China will continue to fall and would reach approximately 18% by 2050. Unlike China, India had an opposing trend which is that the number of residents increased from 15% to about %18 between 1950 and 2022 and it would be just over 20%.
When it comes to the USA and Japan, the populations of both of them reduced from the beginning of the period to 2022. In addition, it is foretold that the percentage will remain the same in the USA, whereas in Japan, the population is likely to keep falling till 2050.
In overview, by 2050 while Japan will have the lowest percentage among the four countries, India will reach the highest amount.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...he biggest percentages during the given period of time. To begin with, although people who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.473973988 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9364603549 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315087405272 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134241381827 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607830530846 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18597443553 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221552014755 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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