The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates number of attendance before 2019 Stadium improvements and projected number of the attendance after the improvements for three types of use, Theater, Sporting Events and Concerts. Overall, the total visitors will be increased after the stadium improvements and in particular, for Concerts, it is expected significant increase of users in 2030.
To look at the graph closely, Sporting Events is the most popular use of the stadium throughout the period. The popularity steadies even before the renovation, but there is gradual upward of the number of visitors after 2019's construction, although there is no dramatic changes.
On the contrary, there is a significant grow in both Theater use and Concerts use of the stadium in 2030. Both are more than doubled of 2020's attendance number, around 500000 users for Theater, around 120000 users for Concerts in 2030.
In all three types, the number of attendance will be continuously increased and will peak in 2030.
- Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- The charts below show each grade level’s activity and the total revenue gained from it, by percentage, from King Primary School’s recent fundraising event. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 73
- The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 83
- An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 61
- Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, in particular, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29746835443 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85874943386 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512658227848 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2668260861 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168270782293 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790059591868 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551029993617 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970758228834 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681050657529 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.