The chart illustrates the percentage of women having their first child from 1966 to 2006.
Overall, it can be seen that all age brackets experienced an upward trend in the number of women giving birth to their child, except for those aged under 19, and 19-24. In addition, the 30-34 age group had the highest proportion, whereas the lowest figure shown on the chart was recorded in the over 40 age bracket.
Turning to the chart for the detail, in 1966, those aged 19-24 accounted for about 62% of the total number of first-time mothers, compared to roughly 34% of those aged under 19. Throughout the next 40 years, these figures dropped significantly, reaching 28% and 12% respectively. In contrast, the 25-to-30-year-olds experienced a slight rise from 35% to 38%, despite a high of 50% in 1986.
In terms of the remaining age groups, there were about 12% of women who were from 30 to 34, in comparison with nearly 8% of those aged 34-39. During the following 40 years, the percentage of people falling into the 30-34 and 34-39 age brackets rose significantly, reaching approximately 45% and 30% respectively. Notably, about 3% of women aged over 40 gave birth for the first time in 1966. Before climbing to about 5% over the next 20 years, this figure experienced a slight decrease in 1986.
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 84
- The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 2010 56
- People tend to work longer hours nowadays Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and society so working hours should be restricted Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bracket' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'brackets'.
Suggestion: brackets
...e chart was recorded in the over 40 age bracket. Turning to the chart for the detail, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, whereas, except for, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79910714286 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75847704928 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7057632102 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288054065436 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130001105976 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112112626879 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210517606439 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788364769535 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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