The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
The chart represents the changes made in global sales in three items; games software DVD/Video and CDS from 2000 to 2003. Units are measured in billions of dollars.
Overall, CDs had the highest global sales throughout the projected periods but which sales decreased every year. Meanwhile, DVD/Video and Games software showed an increasing trend.
In terms of CDs had recorded the highest global sales from 2000 to 2003. Initially, it recorded at 35 billion of dollars and which amount decreased steadily to reach at about 32 billion dollars in 2003.
In opposed to this decreasing trend, the remaining items had experienced the increasing trend. In 2000, DVD/Video had about 17 billion of sales globally whereas around 11 billion sales for Games software. This increased substantially to reach at about 27 billion and around 17 billion for DVD/Video and Games software respectively in 2002. By 2003, the global sales for DVD/video grew to reach at approximately 31 billion dollars of sales while Games software had the constant sales at 17 billion dollars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e constant sales at 17 billion dollars.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'whereas', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239361702128 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.143617021277 0.116061578633 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0425531914894 0.0759168565197 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0585106382979 0.0366838410393 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00531914893617 0.0131127313244 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143617021277 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0531914893617 0.0379272487307 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64473643802 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031914893617 0.0210936926555 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0691489361702 0.0948980150116 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106382978723 0.00967000014798 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1065.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.9 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22807017544 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380116959064 0.337110787985 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309941520468 0.247514529752 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210526315789 0.171178102325 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12865497076 0.112407865282 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64473643802 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.546246751206 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.8930568367 49.3433353143 77% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3411940941 42.9750493124 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 135.714022679 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 23.0094962315 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 48.0941520468 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.10256410256 2.94281807926 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399553442692 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125162071351 0.181151798455 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.156775916227 0.0850326197045 184% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625507440028 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158094228877 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198326967606 0.228904883108 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100496031361 0.108899403657 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275513045309 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105007267576 0.0812612215331 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291108708008 0.316326947829 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722688591252 0.0921553760075 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.