The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
The bar graph depicts information about the variation in worldwide sales of games software, dvd or video and cds in billion dollars from 2000 to 2003.
In an overview, it can be noticed that cds were replaced by dvd or video and games software in the final year as compared to the initial year.
As it is apparent from the figure that, games software which was the leasr purchased means of entertaunment, increased gradually from about 12 billion dollars to about 19 billion dollars between 2000 to 2003.Similar trend of increment can be seen for dvd, which almost doubled for around 30 billion dollars from 15 billion dollars within 3 years of period.
On the other hand, cds which was the most preffered source of entertainment in the initial year dropped minimally from 35 billion dollars to 31 billion dollars in the later year, a decline of around 4 billion dollars in 3 years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similar
...19 billion dollars between 2000 to 2003.Similar trend of increment can be seen for dvd,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58294678617 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.9360227146 43.030603864 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.5 112.824112599 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 22.9334400587 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177579550096 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157050219905 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137558391036 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157050219905 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137558391036 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.29 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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