The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The pie chart compares the figures for visitors to four types of tourist attraction to five distinct theme parks in Britain in 1999.

Overall, It is evident that Theme Parks and Museum/Galleries were the most popular destinations among travelers in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.

Looking at the information in more detail, the figure for people paying a visit to a theme park registered the highest proportion of 38% and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were out of favour when occupying only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attractions, with only 9% of visitors.

In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) visited Blackpool Beach Pleasure. Alton Tower was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Portland, with 16%. Finally, Chessington of Adventures and Legoland, Winsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.

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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74322397514 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594444444444 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4711872871 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183179429663 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797816045248 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899702914642 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126460537134 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100940942811 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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