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In today’s world, It is easy for every person to own a personal computer or a smartphone that is connected with the internet and they don’t have to tackle any problem which involves their job in person. This is the reason why people these days tend to work at home instead of going to their company. In this essay, I will concern three benefits and also two drawbacks that I think about that issue.
There are many profits that make people choose working at home. Firstly, people can save their time because they don’t ought to transfer to their office. For instance, It takes about twenty to thirty minutes to wait a bus if you use public transport. Secondly, it is expedient for you to take care of your family members such as the babies and the elder. Finally, People believe that working at home is also convenient. For example they feel more comfortable since they can eat and drink whenever they want.
By contrast, some people argue that this kind of work do not really effective due to several reasons. The first disadvantage of that issue is people can get distracted. By way of example, whilst they are working, their concentration can be interrupted because of their family. Moreover, It is difficult for people to communicate with their co-workers. For instance, when people want to solve any problem, they must use online chatting which help them talk to their colleagues.
In conclusion, nowadays, people have a tendency to finish their job at home as a replacement for working at the company or office. On the other hand, they also argue the pros and cons of this topic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to work'.
Suggestion: to work
...re many profits that make people choose working at home. Firstly, people can save their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78057553957 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53775385073 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2542107414 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846754858875 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342962062602 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207088839446 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579094207587 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00589712834328 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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