Global warming is one of the biggest threats to ourenvironment. What causes global warming? What solutionsare there to this problem?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevantexamples from your own knowledge or experience.
Human activities have made the natural heat of the Earth increase greatly for a long time. In today’s world, global warming is the enormous problem because of its harmful effects on our environment. In this essay, I will concern two reasons that cause average air temperature rise and I also offer some solutions to that issue.
The first reasons I think is people use lots of plastics now. Many items in daily use are made up of plastic such as coffee cups, straws, water bottles, bags because it is not only convenient but also having budget cost price. Plastic products are discharged continuously and people usually burn down them, therefore, gases which induce world’s warmness are produced more and more. Thus, I suggest that people should replace plastics items with others material. For examples, people can use individual bottles, metal straws and fabric bags instead of plastic ones. Reduced plastic use will lessen the speech of global warming.
Another reason is deforestation. People have deforested for agricultural development for many years and this make carbon dioxide gas which is the mainly importance gas to generate heat being eliminated. In my opinion, people ought to plant wood to cover bare hills. Moreover, governments need to give punishments and laws to warn citizens of deforesting. In addition, education of protecting the environment in school should be established.
In conclusion, global warming is the huge intimidation in the world. Any reason that make the environment getting worse must be rejected. Let’s save the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30677290837 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76875518988 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661354581673 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.699285963 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3529411765 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13723674728 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440358779809 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045139144254 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092962366597 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405536229931 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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