The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar Graph shows the popularity of the different sport groups in New Zealand among children and two genders in year 2002. Numbers are given in percentages. Overall, Netball is the most popular sport among girls, while the boys choose to play soccer.

Soccer is played by 25% of boys, whereas it is played by 6% of girls. Strikingly Netball is popular among girls, which is chosen by 25% of girls but it is only played by 2% of boys. Swimming is another sport which done by girls more than boys with 23% former and 14% letter one. On the other hand Cricket and marital arts are mostly played by boys with 13% and 12% respectively. The sports like tennis and basketball are roughly equally popular in both sexes around 5-10%. If we look at the sum of the both sexes, athletics is the least popular sport which is chosen only 7% of the children. A considerable number of boys, reaching almost 20% and 10% of girls, chosen activities which are not listed and categorized under Other category

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Average: 7.3 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60674157303 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33177877889 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1238733688 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111403778812 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479451729772 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385243995765 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104308768522 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332280239087 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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