The chart below gives information about Southland s main exports in 2000 20 and future projections for 2025

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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000,20..,and future projections for 2025

The chart compares the data about main sell overseas in 2000,20..and future draft for 2025.Overall this marketing abroad is among some fields that are International tourism, daily products,meat products in Scotland.
There are some high scores in international tourism and dairy products.For 2000 pointers of tourism is 8 billion and of dairy products is 7 billion.For the current year exports in meat and dairy products show 5.5 billion and highest peak is 10 billion.In comparison meat products export in 2000 is very low that is 6 billion.
In international tourism for current year is 9 and for coming 2025 is 10 billion.The signposts are 9.5 billion in dairy products and lowest is 5 billion in meat products send overseas for 2025.It can be seen sharp contrast between tourism and meat products in the future 2025.From the information, it is clear that international tourism in 2025 equal to dairy products for present year.In the future trade traditionally in meat products becoming low.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19254658385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00152347413 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.0034721594 43.030603864 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.666666667 112.824112599 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6666666667 22.9334400587 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199886728012 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166367929767 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683235028862 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166367929767 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683235028862 0.0819641961636 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.2329268293 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.71 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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