The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The diagrams illustrate the alterations that committed at West Park Secondary School since its erection in 1950. Overall, some places are modified and others are not but reduced.
In 1950 there was a main road and it stayed in place.As for main building of school also was in its area.In spite of science block of school was not built in 1950,but in 1980 it constructed on the left hand near main building and in 2010 section was not removed. Before this construction there were houses and on the middle left hand small car park was arisen. Despite the fact that in 1980 playground was put in its place where on the right bottom corner, by then it was made smaller.
Coming to 2010, area of farmland was exchanged to sports field which was at bottom of left corner, but in 2010 previous car park was expanded and it occupied settlement of spots field. The field was located between car park and playground in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... was a main road and it stayed in place.As for main building of school also was in...
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Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... was a main road and it stayed in place.As for main building of school also was in...
^^
Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...building of school also was in its area.In spite of science block of school was no...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Coming to 2010, area of farmland was exchanged to sports field which was at b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, as for, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59146341463 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32465863626 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2740137457 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222396836823 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12528733251 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138715024987 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199720509368 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150332000798 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.