The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the he world.
The pie chart compares the proportion of water used in six areas of the globe for domestic, agricultural and industrial purpose.
Overall,it is noticeable that larger proportion of water was used for agricultural purpose in Africa, central Asia, south east asia and south america while, negligible amount as used for domestic purpose in Europe and north america.
The larger proportion of water used in Africa,cenrtal Asia, south east Asia and south america is for agricultural purpose which accounted for above 80% of total water used. In contrast, 39% and 32% of water used in north america and Europe was used for same purpose.
North america and Europe used larger proportion of their water for industrial purpose 48% and 53% respectively. Less than12% was used in Africa, central Asia, south america and all the six areas used negligible proportion of their water for domestic purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70287912337 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 58.0 106.607317073 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402777777778 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5024419369 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295514491121 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202900891237 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415370729532 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236673735414 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391589001515 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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