People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. Agree or disagree.
There is currently a contentious argument over whether citizen should not pay tax to the government from their salary. I disagree with h the opinion because government need their taxes to fix the infrastructure and to develop the country economy.
The main reason I disagree with citizen not pay tax to the government form their salary is because government need their taxes to fix the infrastructure. The major work of a good government is to provide basic amenities such as good school, road, electricity for its citizen and all this can not be done if citizen are not paying tax to the government. For example the developed nations of today made compulsory for their citizen to pay tax from what their earning as a result of these they have better road network, uninteruptted power supply, better schools and hospitals. Tax is the major source of government income and it should not be deprive of it.
Another reason is that government can only develop it's economy if is having adequate fund in its coffer. Where will adequate fund come from? If not from tax. Developing a strong economy, citizen have to make sure they paid their tax to the government so that government have more fund to spend on agriculture, tourism and other ventures that can generate additional income for the government. For instance, Thailand is the largest producer of rice , Thai government has spent more on agriculture to make this. Therefore, citizen should be encourage to lay their tax.
In conclusion, I opine that citizen should pay tax to the government to provide basic amenities and develop a good economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: from
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...make this. Therefore, citizen should be encourage to lay their tax. In conclusion, I o...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'laying', 'lying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: laying; lying
... Therefore, citizen should be encourage to lay their tax. In conclusion, I opine th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76123762442 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6890605606 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175774776209 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859427520739 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629159150343 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139599248989 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363531522687 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.