The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The chart gives information about both men and women‘s leisure time in a typical weekend related to their employment status during 1989-1999.
As regard the first, among those full time employed, men had approximately fifty hours of leisure time, while women had thirty-seven hours. Part time women employees had practically forty hours. The leisure time of part time employed women had slightly more than full time employed ones. However, there was no figure for part time employed men given in the chart.
We can see from the chart that both unemployed and the retired ones had substantially leisure time. They had leisure time that, not only nearly as two times as full time employees, but also they had the most leisure time of all of the others. The leisure time men and women had was nearly 85 and 78 respectively. Whereas, there was no figure given for men in the chart for housewives section and, women housewives had a bit under sixty hours of leisure time.
The all over picture is that full time employees had the least leisure time while unemployed and retired ones had the most. If genders are compared, women had less leisure time than men had in all employment status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...99. As regard the first, among those full time employed, men had approximately fifty h...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...me, while women had thirty-seven hours. Part time women employees had practically forty h...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ically forty hours. The leisure time of part time employed women had slightly more than f...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e employed women had slightly more than full time employed ones. However, there was no fi...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... ones. However, there was no figure for part time employed men given in the chart. We ...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e that, not only nearly as two times as full time employees, but also they had the most l...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... also they had the most leisure time of all of the others. The leisure time men and women ...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ers. The leisure time men and women had was nearly 85 and 78 respectively. Whereas,...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e time. The all over picture is that full time employees had the least leisure time wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41802849113 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490196078431 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7156790487 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362733660796 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202268177342 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693837161172 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282569006788 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343145872728 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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