the table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain
The report shows the consumer durables owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983 illustrating durables and the percentage of households with these appliances.
Finding out that television, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner are the most commonly used appliances in Britain with approximately 95% among consumers and this returns to the early invention of these appliances as well their crucial importance in the house while video and dish washer are the least used ones with 18% for video and around only 4% for dishwasher as they are considered as a latest update of the electrical appliances recently invented.
Telephone and central heating also considered as a bulk among the English consumers with average 70% but we find that it was not common in 1972 with 39% but it has roughly increased reaching 70% in 1983 recording its highest.
Finally, the washing machine which recorded 66% in 1972 jumping to 75% 1978 then recoding its highest with 80% in 1983
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 67
- the table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain 78
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.» You should write at least 150 wor 11
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 388, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...or dishwasher as they are considered as a latest update of the electrical applian...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08280254777 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.707433462 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649681528662 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.072411847 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.5 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158387994194 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117159095419 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153307973875 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117159095419 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153307973875 0.0819641961636 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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