Parental responsibilities are equal among fathers as well as mothers although the mother has an appreciated effort in raising her babies from birth passing through all age levels and that may give her the right whether to have babies or not.
Fatherhood is a great sacrifice example like the Unknown Soldier in the fiercest battles, the soldier who sacrifice his life for nothing but his country and the history attribute the victory to the kings at last, father is the one who spend his whole life outside home trying to get the money to improve his family life, educate his children in a way better that he had, to get them what he deprived from when he was their age.
Also the mother who spent her life for her babies, she loves them for no reason but they are her children, she can spend her night up looking after her crying baby with no twitch, she may spend the night praying for him to be better and to be a great man in the future forgetting herself, what a wonderful sensation the god put inside these two souls the father and the mother.
Fatherhood and motherhood are two inseparable things, the both complete each other to bring up their children in the right way even better than themselves so on talking about the decision of having children we find out that it is one of the common decisions that no one can take solely but the parents together because they are sharing their life for a third soul which is their baby.
- the table below shows the consumer durables owned in Britain 78
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 67
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or 61
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.» You should write at least 150 wor 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e deprived from when he was their age. Also the mother who spent her life for her b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, third, well, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50763358779 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27939301984 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7938929993 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 295.25 106.682146367 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185590028603 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104218531659 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379777962955 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104218531659 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379777962955 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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