The chart below shows the coffee consumption coffee production and the profit distribution around the world

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the coffee consumption ,coffee production, and the profit distribution around the world.

The three pie chart illustrates the details of the production, and consumption of coffee and four ways of profit distribution around the world. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall, South Africa was the main country of coffee production, despite Europe consuming the majority of coffee around the world. Moreover, the profit of coffee distributes mainly through delivery.

Regarding coffee production, nearly half of the coffee is produced in South Africa with 44%, and the least amount with 16% in Vietnam. While Japan and Indonesia account for 18% and 22% respectively.
Furthermore, Europe consumes about 41 % of coffee, and Americans' consumption was about 39%. Whereas, only 8% of people in Japan use coffee as their beverage, and in other countries' consumption is a mere 12%.

In terms of profit distribution, more than half of the distribution is done by delivery with 51%. Retailers' and Exporter's profits represent around 24% and 10% respectively. In addition producers' distributions are approximately 15% aound the world.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... coffee as their beverage, and in other countries consumption is a mere 12%. In terms...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ent around 24% and 10% respectively. In addition producers distributions are approximate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50310559006 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04673249157 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9622874918 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426217343004 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146195603954 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12531405869 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23197573616 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113285377432 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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