The bar charts show information about passable house expenses in England London and to hand over the equivalence in respect to the passable house cost between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

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The bar charts show information about passable house expenses in England-London, and to hand over the equivalence in respect to the passable house cost between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.

Look at the first bar chart, we can see in 1995 prices house in England higher than London but in 2013 prices house in England higher than London. Look at the second bar chart. It can be see that, prices house in London highest compared to other regions. Meanwhile, the Northeast and Midlands have the lowest house princes
At the first bar chart, in 1995 price house in England have number is a little higher than 100000. In contrast, in London have number higher than England is 200000. Until 2013, price house in increased than England in 1995. In capital city England-London has increased significantly and has a number of 400000 compared to 1995
Loọ at the second bar charts, the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within 2013. In London have a number highest compared to other regions of 400000. Meanwhile, in Midlands have a number lowest is a little higher than 100000 and Northeast have the same number. In contrast, in the southeast has a larger number than the two regions above, and it's a bit more than 300000. In the southwest only 250000 lower than in the southeast. Finally, Northwest only 200000 lower than southeast and southwest

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...3, price house in increased than England in 1995. In capital city England-London ...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Northeast' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Northeasts'.
Suggestion: Northeasts
...west is a little higher than 100000 and Northeast have the same number. In contrast, in t...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... number than the two regions above, and its a bit more than 300000. In the southwes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83902439024 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4177412874 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424390243902 0.622605031667 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 1.44329896907 762% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3493952592 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233018669906 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104484827619 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101077243511 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19079570887 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058586972982 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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