The chart below shows the different level of post school qualifications in Australia and proportion of the men and women who held them in 1999
The below graph illustrates various level of post school qualifications in Australia and ratio of male and females who held them in 1999
In Australia the highest ratio of males held a degree in skilled vocational diploma, while females were in a greater number ungraduste diplomas.On the other side of the scale females were least involved in courses related to skilled vocational jobs and men had fewer number in undergraduate diplomas
Australian men were inclined towards skilled vocational diplomas and had a very high male to female rationthan any other course with 90 percent males and 10 percent females.While on the other hand females were dominant in ungraduste diplomas with a number of above 60 percent and males made up just below 40 percent of the graduates.
Males had a greates proportion in postgraduate abd masters degrees with 70 and 60 percent respectively , while females had 30 and 40 percent enrollement in the aforementioned courses.Enrollment in bachelors degree had a rare feature with the near equal distribution amongst both genders , males at 45 and females 55 percent respectively.
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross section of 100000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98.The second chart shows their destinations over the same period Write a report 67
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and there levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are causes of these problems and what measures can be taken to solve them 56
- governments should spend money on railways rather than roadto what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more importantdiscuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- The chart below shows the different level of post school qualifications in Australia and proportion of the men and women who held them in 1999 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28651685393 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14318290359 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 22.4926829268 396% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.5 43.030603864 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 470.5 112.824112599 417% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 22.9334400587 388% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.23603664747 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134467476848 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901096956272 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739773193452 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140906880611 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183507164666 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 13.2329268293 363% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.32 61.2550243902 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 10.3012195122 381% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.04 8.06136585366 149% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.4329268293 516% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.9970731707 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 11.0658536585 533% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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