The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the frequency of people in the USA who consumed fast food between 2003 and 2013.
Generally speaking, in 2003 and 2006, people who ate at fast food stores once a week accounted for the highest percentage while it was once or twice per month in 2013. And the Americans who consumed fast food daily only accounted for the smallest proportion.
In the first three years, the percentage of American citizens who ate fast food at restaurants was over 30% but it fell to 27% in 2013. People consumed fast food with the frequency of once or twice per month felt by 5% in the first three years. However, it increased to 33% in 2013.
The number of several times a week consumers was about 16% to 20% in the whole period of time which was higher than the percentage of few times a year consumers. The rate of people who went to fast food restaurants every day and people who never accessed to it remained at under 5%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...umers was about 16% to 20% in the whole period of time which was higher than the percentage of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37459967877 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8619351036 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217491486573 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115321371008 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833086819755 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168565179525 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812621988614 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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