The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the data about the percentage people in USA ate in fast food restaurants, in everyday, several times a week, one a week, a few times a year and never, for the years 2003, 2006, and 2013.
Looking at the dataset in 2003 in more detail it can be seen that most of the people in the USA love to eat fast food once a week and it is around 31% and the lowest percentage, around 4% of people in 2003 like to eat junk food every day.
Turning to the 2006 and 2013 records it is evident that 33% of people who are in USA like to eat fast food in restaurants in 2006. This value remained unchanged in 2013, for the category of people who like to eat fast food once or twice a month. This is the maximum data in the chart. Additionally, 3% of people would like to take fast food every day in both 2006 and 2013. This is the least data in the chart.
Overall, it can be seen that the highest percentage of people who live in the USA ate fast food once or twice a month and once a week in 2013 and 2006 whereas the lowest percentage of people ate every day in both 2006 and 2013.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...in USA ate in fast food restaurants, in everyday, several times a week, one a week, a fe...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03652968037 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10882786877 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41095890411 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5554333473 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245323660199 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125249766868 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438316875016 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165424734422 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217426937689 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.45 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...in USA ate in fast food restaurants, in everyday, several times a week, one a week, a fe...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03652968037 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10882786877 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41095890411 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5554333473 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245323660199 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125249766868 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438316875016 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165424734422 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217426937689 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.45 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.