The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by corincic1 on Fri, 03/15/2019 - 15:17

The chart below figures the frequency of eating fast food at resdtaurants from every day to never in USA between years 2003 and 2013. Units are measured in percents.
Overall, the most frequently fast food eating is once or twice a month in 2013 year and once a week in 2006. The lowest point (approximately 3%) is between 2006 and 2013 at "every day" and approximately 4% in 2003. The same percentage is at the "never".
In 2003, over 30% decided to eat fast food once a week, 5 % did it never, and just 4% did it every day. In 2006, approximately 34% ate at fast food restaurants once a week, that represent a big difference between those who visited it every day and never. In 2013, more than 30 % visited fast food restaurants once or twice a month, and the lowest point of this year is at "every day" (~3%).
In the middle of this chart is the datas of the 2006 year (20%), it shows that Americans prefered to ear fast food several times a week. There are no big differences between people who eat this type of food a few times a year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ween those who visited it every day and never. In 2013, more than 30 % visited fast f...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ose who visited it every day and never. In 2013, more than 30 % visited fast food ...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... year is at 'every day' ~3%. In the middle of this chart is the datas o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4387755102 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72457779309 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515306122449 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6186124146 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 5.23603664747 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210341090655 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955218844871 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647256140059 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151464492522 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410273778748 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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