The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989.
The bar chart demonstrates how the average house prices in five various cities changed from 1990 to 2002 in contrast to the average prices of houses in 1989. Overall, the average prices of housing increased in most of the sampled cities from 1990 to 1995, while in the rest period they rose in all the locations except Tokyo.
Starting with the first period from 1990 to 1995, there was a decrease in the housing prices, with Tokyo and London suffering the greatest losses at -7.5% each, and New York facing a slighter dip at -5%. On the other hand, the six years witnessed moderate price rises in Madrid and Frankfurt, +2% and +2.5% respectively.
Turning now to the next seven years, the prices in all the cities except Tokyo showed an upward trend, which was dramatic in London (nearly +13%) and least obvious in Frankfurt (+2%). Meanwhile, the prices in New York and Madrid rose by the similar proportion (roughly +5%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, while, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75155279503 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25745424926 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6681034216 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391264994309 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186284087546 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183237372999 0.0843802449381 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243722629422 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177879792611 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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