nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Currently, it is being discussed why there is a growing amount of rubbish(industrial waste and daily garbage) produced by people. This article will provide contributing factors to this trend, then followed by corresponding solutions.
To begin with, the bad living habits of the public has given rise to the everyday garbage in ascending numbers. Compared with the past world, the earth nowadays owns more global citizens, who may create larger amount of plastic bags after they eat packaged food. Therefore, the larger population the world enjoys, the more white pollution there will be. In addition, the frequency of industrial activities leads to the factory refuse rising. There is no doubt that industry is an indispensable part of the current society. Human beings, in developing the industry, also father a great deal of industrial waste that contaminates rivers or lakes by virtue of not being dealt with according to the environmental standards.
In order to tackle these issues, several effective ways should be proposed. For one thing, the government should encourage the public to apply eco-friendly packets(such as degradable ones), which may be decomposed by bacteria within a short time. Thus, we are unnecessarily concerned that larger population can make a difference in the environment. For another, the government is supposed to draw up and enact harsh laws to forced the factories to invent novel production devices, which may emit less poisonous exhaust in the surroundings.
To sum up, plenty of industrial activities and the growth of population play significant roles in the rubbish augmenting. State-of-the-art facilities and degradable plastic packets are required to combat this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, no doubt, such as, for one thing, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44360902256 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06988899487 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5206014321 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131752648362 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372214164089 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372169221802 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742023186063 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310460118497 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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