The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

Submitted by jasir on Sat, 08/10/2019 - 03:25

The chart illustrates the mean variation in accommodation prices in five selected cities over 12 years compared to an average property price in 1989.
Overall, there was a slight downward trend in three out of the five cities in the period from 1990 to 1995, however the average housing value increased moderately in the final years.
In the initial 5 years, the estate price in New York well down by 5 % comparing to the average price in 1989, while the housing cost in Tokyo and London dropped markedly by around 7% in both cities. On the other hand, prices in Frankfurt grew by about 2 percent and by a little less in Madrid.
Turning to the final seven years the largest property price hike witnessed in London to nearly 12% above the 1989 average, whereas New York and Madrid experienced less dramatic increase in prices and figures were 5% and 4% respectively. By contrast, houses in Tokyo remained still cheaper than in 1989, however were 2 percent higher than the 1990-1995 level. The cost of an average home in Frankfurt stayed approximately on the same level that was in the first period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, still, well, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75520833333 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49360103506 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8552238421 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359378523522 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158347976843 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876107277103 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230293115525 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639001056226 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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