The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years.
The line graph provides information on the number of immigrants moving to metropolitan cities in three distinctive countries over25-year period, commencing in 2000
From a general perspective, at first glance, the movement trend in all three countries has seen to be improved throughout the period except for in case of prediction . It can also be claimed that the year 2025 is predicted to witness the highest peaks in Iran and Russia and stability tendency in Indonesia
In terms of Iran and Russia, although both of these countries showed an upward trend, the converse is observed in their growth rate. Specifically, while the number of Russian immigrants rose gradually between 2005 and 2010, at approximately 15% and over 40% respectively, a sharp climb In Iran was seen in 2020, at 36%. Subsequently, a considerable rise can be seen in Iran 2025, with figures eventually surpassing those for Russia, at 95% compared to roughly 90%
Turning to Indonesia, This country noticed the tedious surge from 2000 to 2020, jumping from exactly 10% to 30%. It was not until 2020 that the migration number stopped intensifying and stalling at 20%. Compared to Iran and Russia, Indonesia features are the lowest among all over the timeline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13366336634 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88472334383 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6416333093 43.030603864 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.833333333 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162521097072 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689590484594 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806958970353 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105575974838 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605898997295 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.