The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011.
The line graph provides information on how many people ( in million ) come from different races namely UK, Asia and other living in Australia in a 35-year period starting from 1976
From a general perspective, while the number of Asian and other races saw an upward trend, the UK’s population in Australia declined over the surveyed time. The total number of foreigners in this country fluctuated; however, it increased at the end of the span.
In 1976, the number of UK’s residents living in Australia was roughly 13 million, which was much higher compared to Asian and other races, with about 7 million and 11 million, respectively. Subsequently, this number rapidly fell to 10 million in the next decade; before gradually declining to 5 million in 2011
The opposite was true for Asians’ population in Australia, this number progressively improved after the initial year. By 2006, the figure reached nearly 12 million, followed by a sustained growth to 15 million, which increased nearly three-fold compared to 1976.
In terms of others, the figure for this witnessed a waving shift, however surged in general. Starting with nearly 11 million, this figure saw a dip in 1986, hitting the lowest point of 8 million. In the following years, after jumping from 8 to 14 million in 20 years, the population gradually declined to just about 12 million in 2011.
In the first 2 decades of the surveyed period, the total figure moderately reduced by 4 million ( from 23 to 19 million ). Following that, the number sequentially recovered to the starting point before gradually surging by 2 million in the last decade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05970149254 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72172786031 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9827006806 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.6 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257713669991 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995300180911 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727274283453 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145259214824 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763560801853 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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