The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011

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The line chart details the proportion of residents living in Australia in millions from different regions between 1976 and 2011.

The diagram compares the distribution of Australia citezens coming from United Kingdom, Asian countries and others with total in percentage over 35-year period, commencing in 1976
From a general perspective, at the first glance, there was a marked similar trend in Other and total proportion, which, fluctuated moderately throughout the period. It can also be claimed that the year 1991 witnessed a significant point at which the rate of Asia, Uk and Other are equally before reversing its orders.
In terms of Britian and Asian countries, while a considerable rise can be seen in the percentage of Asia, the opposite was true for UK, which decline gradually over the time given. Specifically, the former stood at roughly 5 percent in 1976 before climbing to a peak at excatly 15 percent at the end of the period. In constrast, approximately 15 and 5 percent of the latter was noticed in the intial year compared to 2011 respectively
Turning to Other and Total ratio, both of them showed the same variation. In details, Starting at over 10 percent in the first year, Others features drop to 7 percent over a decade, which subsequently recoverd to the highest record at 14 percent in 2006. Almost identical to others, the percentage of total group surge to 25 percent after hitting the lowest point at under 20 percent in 1996, 20 years from the starting point.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92207792208 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75168078748 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.272427532 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.428571429 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0510579955084 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024327091217 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028437013263 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416245805487 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328696142588 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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