The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart illustrates the quantity of movies manufactured by five nations in the three consecutive years: 2007, 2008 and 2009.
Overall, the number of produced films increased in the countries B, C and E, and that in the other two countries decreased. It is also noticeable that the country A made the largest number of films among the five nations.
Regarding the first year – 2007, the country A was at the top, at nearly 90 films. The country B came second, at precisely 50 films. The country D produced about one-fifth of the country A’s films. The remaining countries were similar, at below 10 films.
Concerning the next two years – 2008 and 2009, the nation A still held the top position despite a minimal fall of around 5%. The nation B witnessed a sudden surge of around 20% and still stood in the second rank. The upward pattern of the nations C and E were nearly the same, with the stable slight rise during the two years. The movies in the countries D declined to fewer than 10 in 2008 and then grew to nearly similar to the beginning figure in the final year, around 15%.

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