The charts show the percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and towns between 1995 and 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts illustrate the proportion of residents who were born inside and outside the country of Australia living in cities, towns and rural regions from 1995 to 2010.
Overall, the residents of both categories in the urban areas accounted the largest percentages within the provided period of time. It is also noticeable that the city dwellers in both groups increased over time.
Regarding the year 1995, the people who lived in metropolitan locations for both groups were around 50% and precisely 60% respectively. The people living in towns of the outside-Australia group were around two-thirds of those of the inside-Australia one. The rural inhabitants born in Australia was around 10% lower than those outside Australia.
Concerning the year 2010, the people residing in urban regions still held the top positions in both categories: over 60% and exactly 80%. The people in towns and the countryside for Australian-born people were the same, at around 18%. The two figures were slightly 2% and 1% lower for the other category.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-12-25 | nguyendangquang.aspect | 78 | view |
- Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Topic Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school What are the reasons What could be done to solve this problem 89
- The graph below shows information about the activities that New Zealand an Australian children enjoy doing most in 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...largest percentages within the provided period of time. It is also noticeable that the city dw...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, still, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21301775148 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9325362599 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3411598012 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382563085678 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155718055953 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115980237921 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230948053747 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136891731096 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.