The chart below shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010 with projected sales for 2020

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.

Presenting the bar graphs are compared to the magazines by which is sold per individual in five nations during the 10 years with anticipated sales in 2020.
Overall, it can be noticed that country D witnessed a slight increase in sales in 2020, otherwise, the left countries were not compatible in sales. As compared to the Country B had been a largest figure on selling magazines, country E marked a lowest figure
In the top 3 countries about magazines sold, Country B sold roughly 50 magazines, in which just under 50 units and 40 units were belong to Country A and C in 2000. Nevertheless, the magazines remarked a modest decline to 47 units in Country B, 45 units in Country A and lastly in country C was 35 magazines sold in 2010. In 2020, it is expected that the magazine sold will plummet to 45 units. Additionally, the number is forecast to reach 38 units in Country A and 33 units in Country C.
Between 2000 and 2010, country D reported a little change in the data of magazines sold by 2 units and was correlated to Country E which saw a remarkable soar to 5 units. In 2020, while Country D will reach 23 magazines consume, country E is predicted that is diminishing to 5 units.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
.... As compared to the Country B had been a largest figure on selling magazines, co...
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Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... on selling magazines, country E marked a lowest figure In the top 3 countries ...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...h just under 50 units and 40 units were belong to Country A and C in 2000. Nevertheles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, nevertheless, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49082568807 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74934475058 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7861088411 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340243339891 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170896866594 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413880257883 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215964899794 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482658471639 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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