The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area in 1997 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart illustrates the number of mature people participated in the seven most important and renowned sports for the period of two decades i.e 1997 to 2017.
It is quite evident that gentle walking has the most participated sports of all time. Starting from 1997 almost 50,000 people took part and similarly till 2017 the ratio increased to 55,000 approximately.
Similarly, Football and Hiking takes lead in the analysis, where almost 30,000 people took part and the bar graph raised up to almost 49,000 in 2017.
On the contrary, surprisingly, the least played game seem to be Cricket particularly in the year 2017 where numbers only rose to 8000. As per the graph indicates, people did participate to the extent of 27,000 approximately but the graph showed diminishing behavior as the years passed.
Alongside Cricket, Basketball does not seem to gain much popularity in these twenty years as it started from around 9000 and reached the maximum up to 22000 only.
All in all, Gentle Walking, Jogging, Gym, Football and Hiking seem to be going steady with the numbers as compared to other sports with drastic changes such as Basketball or cricket.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by user Amna Zeeshan :

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, similarly, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03626943005 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6200408041 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.488758748 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142302958098 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658331598962 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476910946186 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074062632467 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551343470746 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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