The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph compares how many incidents and injuries per 100 million pmt happened in some different transportation types in 2002.
it is clear that the number of incidents and injuries in demand respond was highest. it is also noticeable that the figure for incidents was higher than that of injuries in all transportation type.
As regards incidents, there were 225 per 100 million pmt in demand respond, whivh was highest number, compared to only 20 per 100 million pmt in commuter rail. The figure for light rail was 76 per 100 million pmt, which was equal to that in bus. meanwhile, there were 51 per 100 million pmt in heavy rail.
In terms of injuries, 173 per 100 million pmt happened in demand respond, which was over 10 times higher than the figure for commuter rail and light rail were nearly equal, at 35 and 39 per 100 million pmt respectively. meanwhile, there were 66 per 100 million pmt happening in bus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67484662577 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51820874571 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478527607362 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0059739148 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26098847214 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153514417381 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466217292317 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19391285686 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404186870158 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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