It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effects on our social development and therefore should be reduced. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Some people think that some violent program on Tv negatively impact society, so it should be completely reduced. For variety reasons, I totally agree with this idea.
The first reason is that since children are inexperienced, they are easily in influenced by violent TV programs and copy bad behaviors in there. For example, When children watch a movie about a school bully, they can admire him and do everything in imitation of him. This leads to negative affect their personality and development in the future.
In addition to this, nowadays more and more people like violent programs on TV and suppose that it is normal and unharmful, so they tend to solve their problem by violence. As a result, the rate crime can rise significantly, which can cause the instability of society.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the reduction of violence on TV programs because of the negative social effects that result from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01935483871 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76671159106 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1297574722 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26239460084 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108930563736 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850312682468 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168102380886 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911100186704 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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