The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003 2006

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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006.

The bar chart depicts how frequent the UK adults from ages browsing the internet on a daily basis between 2003 and 2006.
Overall, it is noticeable that the four years surveyed experienced increases in the percentages of people using the Internet. Additionally, the Internet was most popular in individuals from 16-24 years old, while the elderly who were 65+ had the lowest figures.
Among the five groups of ages, adults who were at the age 25-44 and 45-54 had the most gradual rises by approximately 30% and 20%, respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage for 16-24 years old peaked at 100% in 2004 and fell to 90% in the next year, while the highest point of 55-64 and 65+ groups were in the year 2006, after shrinking slightly in 2004.
The age ranges from 16-24 always had the largest percentages compared to others groups even when it hit a low of 80% in the first two years, which was the peak of both 25-44 and 45-54 groups of ages. The others last ranges of ages were significantly lower with the most remarkable point of people who were 65+ was only 20%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65079365079 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45706674934 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.1503279334 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227278116507 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118050929806 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925818854533 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166084514782 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101353180516 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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