The chart below shows the percentage of young people taking part in different outdoor sports from 1975 to the present day in the South West of England.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about the percentage of youth in the South West of England practicing jogging or running, swimming, ball games, and biking or roller skating since 1975 til now.
Overall, it has been significant changes in the rate of young people taking part in different outdoor sports. In 1975, ball games had a highest percentage and jogging or running were the lowest. However, over time, swimming replaces ball games, taking the highest spot, but the lowest is still the same.
For jogging or running, it grows approximately 8%, starting from around 7 to 15%. Even though it is increasing in the whole, there is a fluctuation during the process.
For swimming, it has a significant rise from 14% to 34%. The period shows the most increasing of youth taking part in this is from 2000 until now.
For ball games, it was located at the rate of 34% in 1975. However, since then, it started to decrease and end up at 20%, dropped down 14% in total.
For biking or roller skating, its percentage fluctuated over time and fall down to 15% by present day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g or roller skating since 1975 til now. Overall, it has been significant changes...
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...outdoor sports. In 1975, ball games had a highest percentage and jogging or runni...
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...and jogging or running were the lowest. however, over time, swimming replaces ball game...
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...t, but the lowest is still the same. For jogging or running, it grows approxi...
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...re is a fluctuation during the process. For swimming, it has a significant rise ...
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...was located at the rate of 34% in 1975. however, since then, it started to descrease an...
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...me and fall down to 15% by present day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89304812834 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48674026555 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1155062779 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205952330268 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702704317969 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641673654941 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939867240324 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570733220783 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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