The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
comparisons where relevant
The bar chart compares four different locations in Canada that came by native Canadians and migrants
Overall, it is apparent that most of the Canadians prefer to go to the cinema. While this is the most popular area for those born in Canada and English-speaking countries, migrants from other countries show a strong preference towards library
The cinema is by far the most popular location listed in the charts for those with English as their first language - 70% of non-migrants and around 65% of English-speaking migrants. Half the migrants from non-English speaking countries also go to see a movie but 5% more of this preferred the library to the cinema. Roughly 35% to 40% of the other two groups say they visit the library
As far as theatre and zoo are concerned, zoos are visited most by half of the migrants speaking English as their mother-tongue, compared to just over 40% of those born in Canada and approximately 35% of the migrants from other countries. The theatre is the least common place to visit in Canada, with only 10% of non-English-speaking migrants attending, while double the number of native Canadians go to see a play and a quarter of those born in English-speaking countries are theatre-goers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Comparisons
comparisons where relevant The bar chart compare...
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Suggestion:
...show a strong preference towards library The cinema is by far the most popular lo...
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...ish-speaking countries are theatre-goers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02392344498 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14060525386 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511961722488 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9212920337 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.0 112.824112599 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8 22.9334400587 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101342572076 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661387795185 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055887921999 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109987570876 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969546888189 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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