The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compare the numbers of Australia residents who visited places namely Zoo, library, theatre and cinema.
It is clear that most popular place in Australia is cinema. In opposite theatre is the less visited place by different people.
People who was born in Australia accounted for the largest percentage of cinema visitors (which is 70%), compared to the lower figure for new migrants born in the other countries is a little less than the number of residents born in Australia, with 65%. In contrast, almost 60% of library visitors are new migrants born in other countries, followed by 40% of new migrants born in English-speaking countries and 38% of inhabitants born in Australia.
The figure of Zoo visitors almost the same with number of library goers. The highest per cent, with 50%, are new migrants born in English-speaking countries. The figures of residents born in Australia and new migrants born in other countries are almost the same, at 40% and 35% respectively.
All inhabitants go to theatre less frequently. The smallest number of theatre visitors is new migrants born in other countries, with 10%. The numbers of visitors who born in Australia and new migrants born in English-speaking countries are 20% and 23%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-25 | chohuzx | 56 | view |
| 2023-09-24 | quynhanh22 | 11 | view |
| 2023-09-24 | quynhanh22 | 11 | view |
| 2023-03-31 | Gemma ne | 73 | view |
| 2022-08-29 | Nazira | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07804878049 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9199268202 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429268292683 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9215740892 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6363636364 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753349355858 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456403050783 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507862198167 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727134515246 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623496766675 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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