The given graph illustrates how to remake consumed papers.
As can be seen from the graph, there are six main stages in the procedure of recycling papers. The process begins at the collecting stage and ends at the manufacturing stage.
Looking at the process in detail, the waste papers must first be delivered from companies or paper banks to the collecting point. The used papers are then handled and distributed by hand into two types. Workers keep high-quality papers while unsuitable ones are removed. After that, treated papers are transported to the factory where they are torn by mixing machines.
In the fourth stage of the procedure, torn papers are cleaned and washed before being erased inks or glues on them. Finally, papers are put into the manufacturing machine to produce new recycled papers. These papers are ready for sale and the recycling process is one more time happened.
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- Some people prefer to live in small family units while others think it is better to live in large family groups Discuss both of views and give your opinion 73
- The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, look, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02013422819 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53953913976 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5545615375 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25460979705 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940177074767 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684861156112 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12689654636 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091634876732 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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