The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The chart gives information about the distribution of visitors to four distinct types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.
It is clear that theme parks and museums and galleries are the most popular types of tourist destination in Britain. Furthermore, with regard to theme parks, Blackpool Pleasure Beach has the largest number of visitors in the same year.
In 1999, 38% of visitors went to Britain’s theme parks. Notably, the proportion of visitors who visited Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the highest out of five locations, at 47%. The figures for Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Southport were 17% and 16% respectively. Two other destinations were Chessington World Adventures and Legoland in Windsor made up just 10% for each in that year.
The number of visitors who interested in museums and galleries stood at 37% of the total travelers. Historic houses and monuments accounted for only 16%, while wildlife parks and zoos saw the lowest number of visitors in 1999 with 9%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, while, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78711735799 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3695118795 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210497733294 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887919440603 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964062686195 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150067351262 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111007256887 0.0819641961636 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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