The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar graph demonstrates the value of a country’s export in different categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage increase or decrease in each category of exports in 2016 in comparison with 2015.

From the graph it is evident that in 2015 the value of export was most in the field of petroleum products, about 60 billion dollars, which increased by 3% in from 2015 to 2016. Engineered goods contributed a significant portion to the export of the country in 2015. It increased by a substantial percentage in 2016, 8.5%. Other categories like agricultural products and textiles have an increasing trend from 2015 to 2016. Although agricultural product export increased by a slight percentage, textiles grew by 15.24%, which is the largest percentage increase among all the others.Gems and jewellery is the only category which faced a reduction in it’s export, about 5.18%. The overall data indicates that the export value has a mixed trend in all the categories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Gems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16049382716 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97471947448 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2494725715 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471759940725 0.215688989381 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.238946475634 0.103423049105 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151293070911 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.478887293944 0.15604864568 307% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182079419265 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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