The chart below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart and table illustrate figures of five products exported and proportion changes in figures products of country from 2015 to 2016. The five products categories are petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles.

Overall, the major exports products is petroleum products whereas, textiles products had experienced major change in percentage in values. However,
textiles products was least exported over a period of time while, petroleum products had small change in values

As seen in the bar graph, petroleum products and engineered products had almost same export figures in both year which was 60 billion in 2015 and just above 60 billions in 2016. Followed by, gems and jewellery whose export figures was around 40 billions in both years. However, agricultural products and textiles products are least exported in values of 30 billions.

In the table, textiles products experienced major change in proportion which products are exported by 15.24% higher than previous figures followed by engineered products saw 8.5% increase along with gems and jewellery exports rise by 5.18%. However, petroleum products and agricultural products had least change in proportion of values by increase of 3% and decrease in 0.81% in exports figures

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, well, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60101010101 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70747113728 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449494949495 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4442062924 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.625 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176451212148 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103735879403 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595562445054 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121853401618 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421775099216 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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