The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did a regular physical activity in 2010

The bar graph illustrates the proportions of Australian men and women of various age groups who had done physical activity in 2010.

Overall, the female has dominated male in doing workout in different age group in contrast to 15-24 years age group. The major difference between male and female is seen in 35-44 years age group whereas, there is minor difference between them in 65 and above years age group.

As seen in the bar graph, there was a 13% of major difference in 35-44 years age group between male and female in doing physical activity which represents 53.3% of females and 43.1% of males. Followed by, females are more active by 8.2% than male counterparts in 45-54 age group similarly, females proportion are 7.9% and 6.7% greater than male proportions in age groups of 55-64 years and 25-34 years. However, in age group of 65 and above, there was a minor difference of 0.4% between males and females.

In the graph, there is opposite trend followed in 15-24 years age group in which males proportion are greater than females. 52.8% of males are active in physical activity whereas, 47,7% of females did physical activity.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43200228381 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441025641026 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1080234735 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307493502274 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178645755847 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105230942183 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247689234411 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110042197015 0.0819641961636 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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