The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting th

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The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

In chart bar Destination of Anthropology graduates on university, the data compare about a various percentage of anthropology from full time work, full time postgrad study, part time work, part time work plus postgrad study, unemployed and, not given or not known by the data also. From the chart the highest percentage for Destination of Anthropology graduates is full time work, and the lowest percentage is part time work plus postgrad study, next it can be seen from the chart for part time work and unemployed its almost same because reach 15% and 12%, and the same percentage it can be seen from full time postgrad study and not given or not known data because same percentage in 8%.
Conclusion from the Destination of Anthropology graduates data, full time work is dominated the survey, and by the data from one university is part time work plus postgrad study is smallest get the score or the vote in that report.
Following that information, other data give the information about salaries of Anthropology graduates with same source from one university. Its more given information about salary with graduates after 5 years worked, and describe from type of employee such as freelance consultants, government sector, and private companies.
However the data shows in dollar rate about type of employment, and the data show that the higher reach for salary is in government sector because 50% get a $100.000 or more, and the lowest salaries is in private companies because it dominate with 35% data in $50.000-74.999 of salary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...various percentage of anthropology from full time work, full time postgrad study, part ti...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ge of anthropology from full time work, full time postgrad study, part time work, part ti...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ll time work, full time postgrad study, part time work, part time work plus postgrad stud...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ll time postgrad study, part time work, part time work plus postgrad study, unemployed an...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...and, not given or not known by the data also. From the chart the highest percentage ...
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Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...estination of Anthropology graduates is full time work, and the lowest percentage is part...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...time work, and the lowest percentage is part time work plus postgrad study, next it can b...
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Line 1, column 486, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... next it can be seen from the chart for part time work and unemployed its almost same bec...
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Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...the same percentage it can be seen from full time postgrad study and not given or not kno...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ination of Anthropology graduates data, full time work is dominated the survey, and by th...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... and by the data from one university is part time work plus postgrad study is smallest ge...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the smallest'.
Suggestion: is the smallest
...y is part time work plus postgrad study is smallest get the score or the vote in that repor...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ernment sector, and private companies. However the data shows in dollar rate about typ...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dominates'?
Suggestion: dominates
...ries is in private companies because it dominate with 35% data in 0.000-74.999 of salary...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03137254902 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73967531619 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41568627451 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3925575732 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 213.833333333 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194831957498 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122514041066 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328934068874 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135541351937 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458675066109 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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