The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years Summarize the information by selecting and reporting th

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The chart below shows what anthropology graduate from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates the percentage of six different activities anthropology students from one university did after graduating. The table compares the percentage of salaries of anthropology graduates after 5 years of working in four intervals for three different employments. Overall, the majority of the graduates did full-time work, and the majority of freelance consultants and government sector employees' salaries are more than $75,000.

Full-time work was the most chosen destination with its more than half proportion. In contrast, part time work + postgraduate study was the least chosen destination, holding one in twenty out of all. Graduates who were unemployed and did part time work were between 10-15%, and the proportion of the graduates whose destinations were not known and were full-time postgraduate students was 8%.

After five years of working, two fifths of the graduates who work as freelance consultants earn over $75,000, and 30% to 50% of government sector employees earn the same amount of salary. On the other hand, one in twenty and less than a fifth graduates who are both freelance consultants and in the government sector get $25,000-74,999 salary. For private companies employment, the proportion for each interval is more evenly with a maximum 10% difference from each other.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
...strates the percentage of six different activities anthropology students from one universi...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...more than half proportion. In contrast, part time work + postgraduate study was the least...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
.... Graduates who were unemployed and did part time work were between 10-15%, and the propo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...or get 5,000-74,999 salary. For private companies employment, the proportion for each int...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45812807882 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01643900445 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5542282627 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20201843938 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956944053592 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775313508495 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149200641365 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970572021045 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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