Different generations tend to have differences in music tastes,therefore classical forms of entertainment do not thrive in the modern era. Therefore,it is necessary to analyse the background of our society to understand the cause, and it’s wise to promote its expansion in the modern era.
Different generations tend to have differences in music tastes,therefore classical forms of entertainment do not thrive in the modern era. Therefore,it is necessary to analyse the background of our society to understand the cause, and it’s wise to promote its expansion in the modern era.
From my experience,new forms of art are an increasingly beneficial industry,
because of that, they get a large amount of promotion and investment. In the other word, it is only natural for classical arts' public acknowledgement to fall. This wasn’t due to the downgrade in quality of the performer or the classical art’ community, but rather because of insufficient funding and marketing. This reflects that without enough capital gains, the downfall in popularity is just a matter of time.
In my point of view, recent cultures such as hip hop emit an abusive expression. One of the most beloved song in the hip hop culture-Thotiana delivers a violent message, the artist referred to gang fights and prostitution, this may effect the younger generation. While classical plays and performances express emotions, and convey life experience and lessons to be a better person. Generally, supporting classical arts is the sensible decision, with what it is capable of, it can allow the improvement of the whole generation.
To conclude, it’s crucial to revive traditional arts as a form of entertainment, and inappropriate forms of arts shouldn’t be granted the right to be played or displayed anywhere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36134453782 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31064708987 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0136460641 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296154147975 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103299914564 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18890137802 0.0667982634062 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170456417525 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.273408265356 0.056905535591 480% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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