The given bar chart presents data on the average daily minimum and maximum levels of sulfur dioxide and nitrous oxide in Los Angeles, Calcutta, Beijing and Mexico City in the year 2000. Overall, the average daily levels of SO2 production in Mexico City and Los Angeles are higher than their N2O levels while the trend was reversed in Beijing and Calcutta, where the amount of air pollutants stemming from N2O gases were overwhelming.
In terms of SO2 production, Los Angeles had the least amount, around two micrograms per m3 minimum and 10 micrograms maximum. Mexico City was the most polluted with SO2 levels. The maximum SO2 emissions in the city were 200 micrograms, double that of Beijing and twenty times more than Los Angeles. There were only 12 micrograms of SO2 differences between the maximum and minimum levels of this gas in Calcutta.
The figure standing for the minimum level of nitrous oxide pollutant in Beijing was the least among four cities at 14 micrograms per m3.The same trend applied to the maximum level of this gas where Mexico City led with 207 micrograms N2O per m3. The following cities were Los Angeles, Beijing, Calcultta which had 104, 54 and 52 micrograms N2O per m3 respectively.
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The given bar chart presents data on the...
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...inimum levels of this gas in Calcutta. The figure standing for the minimum leve...
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...ong four cities at 14 micrograms per m3.The same trend applied to the maximum level...
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...ity led with 207 micrograms N2O per m3. The following cities were Los Angeles, Beij...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94660194175 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47115988196 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7995707933 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310304831471 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14632256942 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896127853672 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228657433078 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958681343792 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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