Task 1: The graphs show changes in the trends of the urban and rural population and by different age groups from 1950 to 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs show data on the changes in the trends of the urban and rural population and regarding by different age groups between 1950 and 2040. Overall, the first graph shows us that the proportion of rural and urban population witnessed a significant increase starting from the year 1950 while the second graph indicates that most of the residents were people aging 14 to 23. This tendency is predicted to remain until 2040.
In the year 1950, there were nearly 8% of the total population living in urban areas, about 2% less than that of the total. The figure shows that the rural population started low, there were hardly any people living in this area in 1950. From 1980 to 2000, the metropolitan was leading in the number of civilians where they rose from 15% to 20%. A slight surge was also recorded in rural areas with the adding of 5% more residents. The year 2000 marked a dramatic escalation in the urban population. It is forecasted that one-third of the total civilians will live in cities in 2040, which may seem far-fetched to be compared with that of countryside residents. Its figure is predicted to reach 10% by that year.
In the first year of the period, 8% of the population was people who were 16-65, the proportion of people in the age group 0-15, as well as over 65, were 2,5% and 5% respectively. The second time frame starting from the 1980s to the 2000s spotted a remarkable rise in the number of residents coming from the age group 16-65 while the other figures stayed stable. However, there was a downward trend in the number of kids and young teenagers in the year 2000, this trend is also expected to stay unchanged in the following years and reach 6% in 2040. In contrast, both figures standing for old people and teenagers to middle age people started to increase ever since. In the last year mentioned, there will be 10% of senior citizens, three times less than that of the 16-65 population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ncy is predicted to remain until 2040. In the year 1950, there were nearly 8% o...
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Suggestion:
...s predicted to reach 10% by that year. In the first year of the period, 8% of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, third, well, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 33.7804878049 181% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 344.0 196.424390244 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64244186047 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41577813092 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485465116279 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8195158432 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250412747159 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089912767228 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109187363869 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205674607689 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12585878267 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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