The breakthroughs of technological advances allows many universities to offer their students online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Personally, I believe this current trend has both pros and cons. This essay will discuss both sides of this trend.
On the one hand, there are certains benefits that online courses can give students.
Firstly, one vital advantage of e-learning is that it helps students to study during the pandemic.During this harsh time, many college students can not attend in-person classes. Now, with the appearance of online courses, they can still study without their lessons being postponed. Compared with traditional classes, online classes are more flexible in terms of schedule. Many students have strict time management so it will be too difficult for them to study on a regular basis. Online courses provide learners with a wider range of time-table. Thus, students who are busy working or doing other tasks in the morning can now apply to evening classes and vice versa. Second of all, it also supports undergraduates who have to give up on school because of poverty. In this case, online courses with reasonable prices can be helpful as these give them more chances to enroll in their favorite majors without having more financial burdens. Therefore, this has aided in building a virtual platform for students to learn well at their own pace and can even inculcate the knowledge of specified subjects even in critical situations.
On the other hand, this teaching method also has some undeniable disadvantages such as lack of interactions or focusing problems. It can be seen that these classes prevent them from having actual interactions with their fellows or lecturers. Since online courses do not offer in-person-class, students find it difficult to discuss some problems they meet during lessons with their teachers or tutors. For instance, medical or architecture students have practical exercises, and they may have difficulties showing their issues to the lecturers. Secondly, studying online can diminish their concentration on the lectures. While having classes, pupils can be distracted by notifications from other applications such as Facebook, Instagram, or Twitter. Instead of focusing on work, a lot of students will have a bad habit of checking their notifications whenever they turn on their mobile devices for online classes. Another factor that harmfully affects the undergraduates' ability to study is the internet connection. During the pandemic, new applications were created to help people hold classes through the internet. However, many students reviewed that the unstable connections have prevented them from having proper lessons through these applications. These factors, consequently, may affect their ability to understand the major and discourage them from studying.
To sum up, e-learning has indeed brought about many benefits to learners. Nonetheless, there are still a lot of problems that need to be taken into consideration to innovate this type of education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46835443038 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91373965185 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533755274262 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 506.74238477 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0065562718 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80769230769 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178240022787 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554120206771 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776333120182 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12174076656 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946528326982 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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