The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should s

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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The given bar chart ilustrates the percentage of women and men in a country in Asia who took part in driving test between 1890 and 2010.
Overall, the percentage of women taking driving test is higher than this of men.
First of all, in 1980, it was about 50% women who took the test. In the next ten years, this chart witnessed a moderated rise at more than 50%. The number of driving test taken by women reached the highes point at nearly 70% in 2000, however since 2010, the number drop to more than 60%.
Next, in compared to women, there was less man participated in the driving test. In 1990, the number of men who took part in the driving test is approximately a half less than women. In the next 10 years, the number of men also experienced the rised in the number of taken test as women but a bit higher at nearly 40%. Finally, the number of men who took the test reach the highest point at nearly 50% in 2000 and 2010

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23033707865 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10419321528 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477528089888 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7359685358 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258029760067 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141055353157 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818525375031 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204741620023 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706730498776 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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